You've done better but it was still great
I understand that you probably didn't work as hard on this as your others so I was kinda bing lenient in my scoring.
Your work is always great because of A) how disturbing the story is, and B) How much the viewer doesn't understand it.
Once again you've shown how disturbing you can make your flashes though dare I say this may have been one of your more light-hearted and original ones with the most unexpected twists. But at some point there has to be a line of how much information you DON'T give the viewer. The mysteries behind Salad Fingers or the roof tiling man seem to be more well thought out than this. All lot of it jsut has to do with the dialogue
Instead of One can't help their physical appearance. Maybe substitute appearence for appendege so it can make more sense. It makes it seem more witty rather than the guy couldn't find the right word to describe himself. good work tho